crit #2 is a go~!
lol i know it's hard to get these a lot so when i see this i try my best to throw in my 2 cents =3
you achieved what you wanted to do in the picture, which is great conveyance
this has a great light feel too it, and the expressions are really fun =3
the lighting/electricity really draws your eyes to it, which is always a good sign, sense normally people tend to be drawn to how electricity looks (like that ball that has electricity in it, people can just stare at those XD)
some little anatomy problems here and there, like the grey guys left arm looks like it's bigger than the right. the shoulders on yoshu look a bit off, based on his torso position.
everything else looks great =3
your coloring is impeccable, and so is your shading
i really like this pic it's cute and fun X3
nice job =3