another page another week =3
i greatly appreciate any Critique, but i probably won't change the particular page, but i will apply it to upcoming pages.
unless it is a spelling issue >>;
My spelling is horrible, i know, but the final draft that will be in the book is gonna be spell checked, same with the grammar.
but any help with it will be appreciated XDD
Bad Luck © me
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