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Bad Luck pg105 by The-TAE Bad Luck pg105 by The-TAE


convention comming up
i'd be lying if i wasn't spread thin at the moment >>;


:iconccwelcomedplz1::iconccwelcomedplz2:
i greatly appreciate any Critique, but i probably won't change the particular page, but i will apply it to upcoming pages.
unless it is a spelling issue >>;
My spelling is horrible, i know, but the final draft that will be in the book is gonna be spell checked, same with the grammar.
but any help with it will be appreciated XDD




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:iconalexyoshida:
alexyoshida Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
*It
*this sentence repeats itself, so maybe reword it
*that's (also need a period at the end of the sentence)
*no,
*so,
*you're

sorry it's taken me so long to get to these x_x
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The-TAE Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Professional Artist
what pfft thats fine, you know you don't have too =3
i cant thank you enough for it btw XD
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Spilled-Sunlight Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
love the expression in the middle panel at the bottom
:3
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:iconthe-tae:
The-TAE Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Artist
daw thank you XDDD
glad you do =D
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BlueBandanaJake Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Love this page! There's so much goin on, love the effects on that crystal ball,
and love how the objective is starting to come into focus @w@

And love Coat, just all the time, he's so adorable just enjoying his bowl of
tastiness while the grown ups talk XD
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The-TAE Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Artist
dawq thank you sweetness XDD
your too kind X3
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BlueBandanaJake Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Professional Filmographer

*been rereading your pages* SHES THE ONE WITH THE BOOK CHECKED OUT! Cuz she knew they were coming XD


*facepalm*


DUH!

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The-TAE Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Artist
pfft lol XD
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Jigoku-Rui-chan Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lets start the searching for the pipe!!!:iconherotimeplz:
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The-TAE Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Artist
indeed XD
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